Jungle book has always been one of my favorites and the moral of the story is friends are very important, because in the story and movie you find out that the boys friend is a bear, and a panther and they helped him along the way as he gets older and older, they also helped him become a warrior. The reason why they were teaching him to become a warrior and a fighter is because he had to defeat a tiger that was going to destroy everything.
Travon this is very good however, there are many run on sentences in your paragraph. See if you can re-word it to make the necessary corrections and I will re-grade it. Also, I want you to go in and delete the one with no entry on it.
Travon this is very good however, there are many run on sentences in your paragraph. See if you can re-word it to make the necessary corrections and I will re-grade it. Also, I want you to go in and delete the one with no entry on it.
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